Feedback for Sophie and Charna

1. What did you rate as strengths of the work?

The strengths of this opening are that they used alot of different shot types as well as angles.
They also use the benefit of the night so that the fire and the titles stand out very well.
Because it is dark and the fire is the only light source, it feels like another dimension/fantasy world.
I like the music at the beginning of the opening which also gives a sort of mysterious feeling to the opening.

2. What did you rate as weaknesses?

In the middle of the opening sequence the music changes, which in my opinion does not fit to the opening.
The title with the name of the film is at the end of the opening sequence. Normally trailers have the name of the film at the end, so I think that your opening looks more like a trailer than an opening sequence.
The audience does not really know what is going on. Maybe when the fairies are edited into the opening scene it will make more sense.

3. What do you think the group should change?

I think that the group should change the music and the title with the name of the film (at a different time), nothing else really.

4. what has the other group still got to do? e.g. titles, sound, visuals

The visuals (fairies) still need to be inserted into the opening.